Tuesday, December 25, 2012
Farro and Sulfur Free for the Holidays!
Saturday, October 27, 2012
Umbra Completed!
This book is written from three interlocking perspectives, and as such I have chosen to edit the novel by character rather than by chapter. By working on only one character at a time, I'm keeping the voice consistent, and it's just simply interesting. After writing it all start to finish with all three protagonists mixed together, it's rewarding to see the story through the eyes of a single protagonist.
But anyways, this was mainly to update you, my readers, of what's been going on over here. (Good things!)
In the (near-ish) future, I will be writing a follow-up episode to go with the Einhjorn, and then I will be taking a tonal break from the dreary horror/fantasy world of Umbra to work on something more 'fun'. Ideally something in a contemporary setting to refresh myself!
I'll keep you posted on progress, and any postings you might hope to see from me in the future!
Friday, October 5, 2012
A Giant Leap in the Right Direction
In a nutshell, my husband has landed a job, and I've bowed out of mine. I'll still be working part-time at home, but finally, after several years of struggling to scrape by, I have the opportunity to focus full-time on my writing. I haven't had that luxury since I was unemployed back in 2010, and that whole adventure came with it's own set of stressors (mainly the unemployed part).
Of course, the last couple weeks have been a rollercoaster ride of emotions as we've tried to settle into this new routine. I'm not used to be home so much, and my husband isn't used to waking up so early. I'm the sort of person that gets a bit stir-crazy on a daily basis, so I've been spending more time running and bicycling around town. This is, after all, likely my last chance to soak in the last bit of sunshine before fall and winter truly set in.
I'm still clicking away at Umbra. Still loving it and hating it and dreading the pain I must cause my characters all the time. My plan is to finish the writing process in the next month and give it to the hubby to read while I work on the next installment of The Relics of Asgard series.
I'm happy but, as always, tired. I'm looking forward to the near-future, once the dust clouds have cleared and I can focus on being the author I've always wanted to be.
Wednesday, September 5, 2012
End of Summer
Friday, August 17, 2012
The Einhjorn now on Amazon
I'm returning to you today with happy news of publication. The Einhjorn is a episodic short set in Viking Norway. In writing this 20,000 word episode, my aim was to experiment with the short story format. I wanted to create something with an overarching story as well as a self-contained plot. In the end, I had fun writing The Einhjorn. I look forward to the fascinating episodes to come, and it was a nice break from my usual fare. It was nice to practice a different style in a different voice, but now I must leave it to you, my readers, to enjoy.
For the next couple months the Einhjorn will be available on Amazon for $0.99. Consider picking up a copy!
Wednesday, July 18, 2012
Introducing Umbra
This last month I've stepped back, reassessed my goals, and started again. I'm fresher, more optimistic, but no less over-worked. I am a third of the way through my newest novel, and very near the publication of a short story.
The Einhjorn will be my first stab at episodic fiction. To divulge the truth, I don't like short stories. I don't like reading them, and I don't like writing them. Twenty thousand words is rarely enough for me to find my character's groove. I want to slip into my character's voice, and accompany them through all the adversities I can throw their way. But in this short, I've tried (and hopefully succeeded) to give only the beginnings of a potentially great character. I wanted a fully contained event (a.k.a. episode) within a larger over-arching plot. Concluding the story so soon was uncomfortable. I'm not used to finishing a story that's only fifty pages long. I'm not sure I enjoy leaving my character when she's only getting started. These feelings of unease make me nervous. I'm not sure how it will work out, but I can say I tried. If it doesn't well... it'll suck. But I can learn from my mistakes and improve the series over all.
Umbra is where I have regained my stride. To anyone familiar with my work (most of you), Umbra exhibits many of my stylistic hallmarks: stark, single-person narration, megafauna, deeply troubled characters, and a unforgiving plot. Exploring this new universe and familiarizing myself with this new set of characters has provided me the opportunity for significant growth. The format of this story allows me to switch between three different characters. Umbra allows me to unravel three different cultures and perspectives side by side. My three main characters see the world differently. They have different cultural norms and baselines against which they compare everyone and everything they encounter. They're each distinct and flawed and wonderful.
So here is the opening to Umbra. Seeing as this is a rough-draft, do not be surprised if the finished version looks much different). Consider this your introduction to one of the three main characters that star in this action/adventure/horror.
The calendar never lies. It has served me, my father, my grandfather, my great-grandfather without fail. The stone carvings on its face plate have prepared us for every disaster that has ever befallen my people.
Drought. Famine. Disease.
Today it warns of death.
I realign the circular rings not because I distrust it, but because I don't want to believe it. The moon rotates. The sun spins. Once again they meet above the monstrous face carved in the center.
The coming eclipse is not annular, not partial. The coming eclipse shall cast a more complete shadow, and I have not the heart to warn the others. In the marsh they rake salt from the surface of the evaporation pits. In the village they stoke the smoke house fires. Further down the coast they cut great chunks of crystalline salt from the pock-faced rocks.
I do not tell them what the calendar says. I cannot stand to put the fear in their otherwise peaceful minds. I cannot tell them that today one amongst us will die.
My hand grips the outermost ring of my calendar – the sun. I spin it and spin it and spin it, but it always comes to rest above the scaled face, above the moon.
Total eclipse.
It will be soon. To the east the sun sails over the opaque sea, and coming up from behind, the moon, a pale gray shadow against light blue skies, rushes to catch it.
The calendar never lies. Today someone will die.
I cross my legs and set the calendar upon my thighs. It’s heavy and cold. The carvings on its surface are as familiar to me as the lines on my palm. Its head points out over the empty sea. We watch the undulating waters together: milky whiteness, salt, and the gentle ripples of perch finning in the shallows.
Nothing lives in the waters but fish and monsters. Nothing grows on the sea’s banks but rubber weeds, little red cases filled with salt water. The morning breeze has departed, taking its cool, fresh air with it. Now there is nothing but stillness and dread.
The moon and sun overlap. The former swallows the latter, and the revolving sky seems to freeze.
The sun vanishes behind the moon. My chest itches, and the hairs on the back of my neck stand on end. There is static energy without a storm. There is darkness without night.The shadow arrives. It engulfs the coast. It skates out across the still water.
Minutes pass, but my heart has slowed and time seems hardly to pass. The sun and the moon lock together, and I look directly up at the dark circle looming over us.
It shouldn't be, but it's beautiful. The craterous moon is an imperfect fit for the sun’s perfectness. Beads of sunlight peak around the moon’s rough edges. A void framed by drops of light.
the villagers must see it. They must realize what it means. Has the void claimed someone already? Could it take me?
My hand drops from the calendar’s dials to the harpoon at my side. I curl my fingers around its wooden shaft and force myself to take a few measured breaths. The moment will pass. The sun and moon will break apart. Then I will convene with my people. We will bury the dead. We will curse the moon’s cruelty and the sun’s apathy together.
I wait for the eclipse to end, but it lasts minutes, many, many minutes.
I am still watching, waiting, when the sound draws my attention from the shadowy skies: a ripple, a splash, a gurgle.
Harpoon in hand, I spring to my feet. The calendar, my calendar, falls upside-down on the salty shore.
They rise from the water, gray skin drooping, fanged mouth hanging open. The creatures. Our curse and our greatest fear. Their gills flap, their webbed-fingers flex, and their lidless eyes stare up at me. They teeter on spindly legs. They unsheathe knives made of black glass. They advance.
Dozens of them rise at first, and then more appear until there must be hundreds. They stagger out of the water and gulp down their first breath of air.
I do not wait to see the end of the eclipse. I am not a fighter, and no amount of salt magic can stop the horde. I wish I could claim bravery, but what I do next is not an act of bravery. I run for the animal pens. I run for the protection of villagers bigger, stronger, and braver than myself.
Behind me, they clamber over the rocks and struggle to find footing on their wet toes. An army marches on us, on our little village perched on the top of the bank. Our little huts of elk hide and mammoth bones will not stop them. Our men are too few, our harpoons too clumsy.
By the time I’ve reached the village, the cry has gone up. My friends and my neighbors and my family are racing for safety.
Overhead, the eclipse ends but it has taken more than it was owed.There you have it, a taste of what I've been up to in the last few weeks. You will hear from me soon.
Tuesday, June 12, 2012
Death of a Romance
Monday, May 21, 2012
My Month-Long Birthday!
Friday, April 27, 2012
Cabin in the Woods
Tuesday, April 24, 2012
From Egypt to Norway
Thursday, April 5, 2012
A Triumphant Return
After a rather climatic ending to an incredibly climatic quarter, I promptly disappeared. Family affairs, work overload, and general sleep debt dragged me down. Last week I finally took my first day off in three months: no writing, no working, no cleaning the house. I took wore my PJs all day and read that novel I’ve been meaning to read for too long. And I must say, that one day has had a miraculous effect on my productivity, and I am happy to report that I am now about 80% finished with the writing of my next novel.
This novel has proved more difficult and more involved than either Farro or Sulfur. It’s a somberer, mellower tale and requires me to back off on my character where before I might have pushed. There is a scene involving elephants, for instance, where I decided to spare a character from being horribly injured. Anyone familiar with my works will recognize what an accomplishment this is for me, but even then I was not completely merciful. No conflict, no story, I say.
This novel also requires an absurd amount of research. Aside from the literature already sitting on my shelf (reminder: my scholarly focus has always been on Ancient Egypt), I have been in contact with historians and anthropologists that have lent depth to my settings. Their advice has been fascinating but time consuming. After all, when you don’t thoroughly control your environment, you are forced to adhere to the real boundaries. After this novel, I intend to rewrite a contemporary novella I’ve had stashed away for six years now. I’m looking forward to writing something contemporary. I know contemporary, I live contemporary. It’s not like history, where I’m reaching back in time and filling in the holes with some sort of barely-passable plaster.
Now, for your patience, here is a sneak peak at my new heroine, Aisha:
They were different like the seasons.
Her father was like the Flood, for his voice filled the hall. Speaking incessantly, speaking loudly, speaking nonsense. He drank all the beer set before him and paid no mind to the flecks of grain stuck to his trembling lips. He was always moving, always consuming. His presence weighed heavily upon her shoulders, and his words—those silly, ignorant words—threatened to smother her.
Lady Kiya, aged and genteel and patient, was the Harvest, for her beckons brought forth the food. She was the lady of the house, the first wife, the professional homemaker. By her lord and husband she had borne four children, all sons. She was in every way the perfect wife, fertile, obedient, and self-assured.
And then Lord Pathi would be the Sowing, for he was the sower of seeds. He was huge and powerful and older than the graying Lady Kiya sitting at his side. He was a warrior, a politician, a judge. He was a father of four, and yet he still desired more. And who was to stop him, when he was rich and could afford what so few could—a second wife?
If they were the seasons, then Aisha was the earth upon which they trod. She was at the mercy of their whims. She was clay waiting to be molded and painted and fired. Her father had offered her up, Lady Kiya had assented with a backwards sneer, and Lord Pathi—her groom—had felt the shape of Aisha’s hips before at last saying, “Very well, I’ll have her.”
So now there she sat, at one end of a table far too long for the four people sitting around it. She had every comfort as the bride: a chair with a cushion, a goblet of beer, a platter of smashed chickpeas, and roasted flat bread. In honor of the occasion, Lady Kiya had even ordered a roasted lamb haunch. It occupied the center of the table, charred black and cut full of garlic, cloves, and coriander pods.
They picked the meat straight from the bone, and it fell away with a plume of steam and a smell of cumin and lard. The grease staining her father’s hands shimmered in the light of the braziers.
It wasn’t that Aisha wouldn’t eat, but that she couldn’t. She didn’t dare move for fear that the delicate façade her sisters had spent all morning creating would crumble away. The makeup had dried hours ago, and it fractured and cracked with each word she spoke and with each smile she forced. Her mask was peeling away like bark from a tree, and she feared that her groom would see her plain face and know how her father had lied to him.
For Aisha was no beauty, just as she was no singer or dancer. These pretty accomplishments were better suited to her younger sisters. Beautiful, lucky girls, who sat at home thinking their eldest sister was so fortunate for having married herself into a rich family.
They were young and romantic, but Aisha was old enough to know the truth. She wasn’t picked for her face or her skills; she was picked because she was older than her juvenile sisters and thus more likely to bear the children Lord Pathi so desired.
He would sow his seed within her, and while the child was growing within her womb she would be subject to the first wife’s desires. She was only the second wife, and as such she was Lady Kiya’s servant in all but name.
This was her life now. She was a wife now and would be expected to fulfill the duties accompanying the station. He was a huge man, tall and muscular, and though she feared the strength of his arms, she knew she would have to bear through her husband’s passion. Scars and veins stretched over his arms like spider webs. When he reached forward, his muscles curled and bulged and stretched.
Tonight he would reach for her with those arms, and he would rip at her clothes as he ripped now at the lamb. He would order her down and take her from above. His bulk would cast a shadow over her so he need not see the plain face her sisters had worked so hard to disguise.
Friday, February 17, 2012
The Widow
Thursday, February 2, 2012
Aisha and the Beast
Monday, January 2, 2012
Happy New Year!
- Finish Project "The Scorpion King" (title to change) by March/April. I hope to begin releasing weekly installments in February.
- Order cover from artist who's handy with Egyptian stylization.
- Publish Farro and Sulfur edition two. I'm currently in the process of rereading both novels for typos and errors. I'm also hoping to rope my coworker into helping me with some copy-editing. She's more experienced than I and not afflicted with dyslexia.
- Start in on my next project in the May region to hopefully finish in the mid- to late-summer region.